Pearl: Do you think that children become rude without volunteering?
Me: No, it is not absolute. I supposed that children become rude because they lack some manners which are hard to learn from schools. To improve children, parents can lead their children to volunteer; then, they might understand to be concerned about others. So, volunteering is just one of methods to make children better.
Me: I think it has a big problem. I disapprove it. It reverses the purpose of volunteers. People volunteer because they want to help others but not for reward. Besides, it is our school or government that asks us that we have to, we need to volunteer. It is not that we really want to do.
Revision List:
Some classmates confused why I mentioned volunteers. It is my fault that I did not explain the link between my issue and my fourth annotation clearly. I have to describe more so that they can understand why my third and fourth annotations are about volunteers.
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| Figure 1: Cheer up. I need to cheer up myself to go through and defeat all difficulties I have encountered. Taken from: s75.photobucket.com |
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