| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:08:50 | 吳 楚茵 | ♥ 貝, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | do u want to introduce a litte bit? | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:09:26 | ♥ 貝 | 吳 楚茵, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | my annotation1 is about a new way to help parents education children | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:09:50 | ♥ 貝 | 吳 楚茵, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | the new way is exchanging children to educate | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:10:30 | crimsonfang2@gmail.com | ♥ 貝, 吳 楚茵, Wang Richard | so again | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:10:34 | crimsonfang2@gmail.com | ♥ 貝, 吳 楚茵, Wang Richard | who's your target reader XD | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:11:11 | 吳 楚茵 | ♥ 貝, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | hey ! XD | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:11:21 | ♥ 貝 | 吳 楚茵, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | children face no longer only their own parents; they also get into diffrent families | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:12:45 | ♥ 貝 | 吳 楚茵, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | parents can exchange thier experience and children can find their playmates (because modren family only has one or two children | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:12:59 | ♥ 貝 | 吳 楚茵, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | my target reader is society | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:13:09 | 吳 楚茵 | ♥ 貝, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | the whole society? | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:13:28 | 吳 楚茵 | ♥ 貝, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | that's wide | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:13:31 | ♥ 貝 | 吳 楚茵, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | yes, i think education is very important | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:13:50 | ♥ 貝 | 吳 楚茵, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | but the main readers are parents and children | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:14:13 | 吳 楚茵 | ♥ 貝, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | ok that's more specific | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:14:51 | 吳 楚茵 | ♥ 貝, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | can u give me the main idea of your issue paper so that i could connect them? | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:15:13 | 吳 楚茵 | ♥ 貝, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | by "them", i mean issue paper and this annotaiton | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:15:45 | Wang Richard | ♥ 貝, 吳 楚茵, crimsonfang2@gmail.com | how do you relate annotation I to your issue paper | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:15:46 | ♥ 貝 | 吳 楚茵, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | my issue paper is about the predicament modern double-income family have | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:16:15 | 吳 楚茵 | ♥ 貝, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | so here comes the solution | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:16:22 | ♥ 貝 | 吳 楚茵, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | responsibility for children's education is transferred to third parties | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:16:29 | ♥ 貝 | 吳 楚茵, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | yes | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:16:37 | 吳 楚茵 | ♥ 貝, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | great | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:16:57 | 吳 楚茵 | ♥ 貝, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | "third parties " could possibly be...? | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:17:06 | ♥ 貝 | 吳 楚茵, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | in last paragraph, i mention now we have more and more clever but rude children | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:17:34 | 吳 楚茵 | ♥ 貝, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | that's for SURE | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:17:45 | 吳 楚茵 | ♥ 貝, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | and damn it cuz i know a few | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:17:53 | 吳 楚茵 | ♥ 貝, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | keep going | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:18:04 | ♥ 貝 | 吳 楚茵, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | third parties are ormal school institutions, cram schools, etc | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:18:07 | 吳 楚茵 | ♥ 貝, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | HAHA | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:18:15 | 吳 楚茵 | ♥ 貝, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | i worked at cram school | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:18:38 | 吳 楚茵 | ♥ 貝, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | ormal ? | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:18:40 | ♥ 貝 | 吳 楚茵, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | yes, modren parents are too busy to get along with their children | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:19:02 | 吳 楚茵 | ♥ 貝, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | can media be one of them? | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:19:05 | ♥ 貝 | 吳 楚茵, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | they depon on others to teach children | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:19:22 | ♥ 貝 | 吳 楚茵, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | yes, but i din't mention media | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:19:27 | 吳 楚茵 | ♥ 貝, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | so ur introducing those third parties | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:19:39 | 吳 楚茵 | ♥ 貝, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | will u or will u not? | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:19:52 | ♥ 貝 | 吳 楚茵, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | maybe~~~ | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:20:31 | ♥ 貝 | 吳 楚茵, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | apparently children can get from those are limited knowledge and skills | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:20:54 | ♥ 貝 | 吳 楚茵, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | how to get good grades, how to compete with others, how to train their intelligence well, but not how to respect others, how to deal with things well, how to have a nice personality | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:21:51 | ♥ 貝 | 吳 楚茵, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | to settle the problem, some parants also find another way to help them educate children | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:22:40 | ♥ 貝 | 吳 楚茵, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | like Play Group, a organization about exchanging children to teach | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:23:21 | 吳 楚茵 | ♥ 貝, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | so will you focus on this problem of education later on? | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:23:39 | ♥ 貝 | 吳 楚茵, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | yes | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:23:47 | 吳 楚茵 | ♥ 貝, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | expecting u to elaborate more (L | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:23:58 | crimsonfang2@gmail.com | ♥ 貝, 吳 楚茵, Wang Richard | :D | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:24:05 | 吳 楚茵 | ♥ 貝, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | ok my last question | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:24:15 | 吳 楚茵 | ♥ 貝, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | {sorry others!} | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:24:26 | crimsonfang2@gmail.com | ♥ 貝, 吳 楚茵, Wang Richard | its okay | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:24:34 | 吳 楚茵 | ♥ 貝, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | "However, what are further reasons which bring new problem about children's education? " can u be more specific? | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:24:50 | 吳 楚茵 | ♥ 貝, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | further ? | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:24:54 | 吳 楚茵 | ♥ 貝, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | from what? | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:24:58 | ♥ 貝 | 吳 楚茵, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | I will anlysis it in annotation2 | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:25:19 | 吳 楚茵 | ♥ 貝, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | !!! | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:25:22 | 吳 楚茵 | ♥ 貝, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | haha | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:25:24 | Wang Richard | ♥ 貝, 吳 楚茵, crimsonfang2@gmail.com | and what is the cause of the predictment? our education system or it's an inevitable social change when entering post industrialized country.. | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:25:28 | 吳 楚茵 | ♥ 貝, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | leak a little will help | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:25:50 | Wang Richard | ♥ 貝, 吳 楚茵, crimsonfang2@gmail.com | go ahead | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:25:58 | Wang Richard | ♥ 貝, 吳 楚茵, crimsonfang2@gmail.com | I ｄｏｎ’ｔ ｃａｒｅ ＸＤ | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:26:00 | ♥ 貝 | 吳 楚茵, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | s an inevitable social change | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:26:21 | ♥ 貝 | 吳 楚茵, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | it's an inevitable social change | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:26:48 | ♥ 貝 | 吳 楚茵, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | nuclear family is the mainstream | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:27:45 | ♥ 貝 | 吳 楚茵, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | however, parents cannt afford to pay expansive cost of living | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:28:07 | ♥ 貝 | 吳 楚茵, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | they both have to go to work | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:28:24 | ♥ 貝 | 吳 楚茵, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | then, what abot their children? | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:29:20 | ♥ 貝 | 吳 楚茵, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | few children, so children also have few or no playmate at home and their parents can't get along with them | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:30:25 | ♥ 貝 | 吳 楚茵, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | parents have few children so that can easily statify what children want~~~ | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:30:43 | ♥ 貝 | 吳 楚茵, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | then children become selfish and wiilful | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:30:48 | ♥ 貝 | 吳 楚茵, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | ~_~ | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:31:07 | ♥ 貝 | 吳 楚茵, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | actually i was one of tehm XD | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:31:41 | 吳 楚茵 | ♥ 貝, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | dear, i got ur point | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:31:51 | Wang Richard | ♥ 貝, 吳 楚茵, crimsonfang2@gmail.com | i got few points | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:31:57 | ♥ 貝 | 吳 楚茵, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | @Q@ | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:32:02 | 吳 楚茵 | ♥ 貝, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | spill it | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:34:32 | 吳 楚茵 | ♥ 貝, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | Tina | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:34:36 | Wang Richard | ♥ 貝, 吳 楚茵, crimsonfang2@gmail.com | any comment on tina's annotation? | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:34:37 | ♥ 貝 | 吳 楚茵, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | here~~ | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:35:01 | 吳 楚茵 | ♥ 貝, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | do u get my point about "leak a little will help"? | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:35:07 | ♥ 貝 | 吳 楚茵, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | yes | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:35:10 | 吳 楚茵 | ♥ 貝, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | good | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:35:20 | 吳 楚茵 | ♥ 貝, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | lets move on then | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:35:25 | ♥ 貝 | 吳 楚茵, crimsonfang2@gmail.com, Wang Richard | brainstorm myself T_T | ||||
| 2012/10/18 | 下午 02:35:38 | Wang Richard | ♥ 貝, 吳 楚茵, crimsonfang2@gmail.com | you'll be alright | ||||
The Revised One:
Templar: Who's your target reader?
My main readers are parents and children who are mostly related to education in my issue.
Richard and Corinne: Can you give us the main idea of your issue paper so that we could connect it to your annotation?
My issue paper is about the predicament modern double-income families have encountered. Nowadays Responsibility for children's education is transferred to third parties. In the last paragraph of my issue, I mentioned now we have more and more clever but rude children. Modern parents are too busy to get along with their children; they depend on others to teach children. However, children can get from those are limited knowledge and skills jut like how to get good grades, how to compete with others, how to train their intelligence well, but not how to respect others, how to deal with things well, how to have a nice personality. To settle the problem, some parents also find another way to help them educate children. My annotation is about one of ways which helps parents teach children.
Corinne: Who are third parties?
Third parties are formal school institutions, cram schools, etc. Those who help parents or even replace them to educate children are third parties.
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